Hi Hyeon Yeong. Great job describing places in your city. You gave simple but clear sentences. Just remember to use "a" before singular countable nouns like "cafe," and always capitalize place names like "Changwon." Keep it up! Your sentence structure is improving! Let's try adding more details next time, like what you can do at the cafe or how the apartments look. You're doing well.
~ T. Lia
There is cafe in changwon
>> There is a cafe in Changwon.
There are many apartments in changwon
>> There are many apartments in Changwon.