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이영숙/2025-06-17

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How can we improve our concentration? 1.I feel like when I hear the sound of water more concentration. 2,Closing my eyes and deep breath . I can concentration good. 3.when I concentration early in the morning.

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Hi, Michelle!

Thank you for doing your homework! Just take note of minor corrections in grammar, but overall, your sentences are getting better! Keep practicing! You got this!

- T. Caitlyn

1.I feel like when I hear the sound of water more concentration.

>> I feel I can concentrate more when I hear the sound of water.
2,Closing my eyes and deep breath . I can concentration good.

>> By closing my eyes and taking a deep breath, I can concentrate well.
3.when I concentration early in the morning.

>> I can concentrate more early in the morning.