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Describe the summer season in your city.

/2025-06-17

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My city is very hot, I want to go to the Waterpark or water pool. But, I'm summer vacation going to the pool.
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                               Describe the summer season in your city.



My city is very hot, I want to go to the Waterpark or water pool.
But, I'm summer vacation going to the pool.
>>> It's really hot in my city, so I want to go to a water park or pool. Luckily, I'm planning to visit the pool during summer vacation.
>>> OR: With the heat in my city, Id love to cool off at a water park or swimming pool. Good thing Ive got a pool trip planned for summer break.