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What are three things you like about yourself?

김일환/2025-06-17

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First, My height is 182 centimeters. I am taller than average, and I look younger than my age. Second, I am living a regular life. I don't enjoy drinking alcohol. I can keep my routine. It means that I spend time with my family after work. Third, I have tried to follow the rule. So, I have open heard from my colleagues that I am the person who can rely on.

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Happy Wednesday, Hwanny!^^

For our general happiness and well-being, self-love is essential. Appreciating and accepting oneself, flaws and all, is the essence of self-love.

Anxiety and despair are less common in those who love who they are. Additionally, developing self-love lowers stress, decreases procrastination, and improves concentration at work.

Thank you so much for this composition. Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)

First, My height is 182 centimeters. I am taller than average, and I look younger than my age.

>>> First, my height is 182 centimeters. I am taller than average, and I look younger than my age.

Second, I am living a regular life. I don't enjoy drinking alcohol. I can keep my routine. It means that I spend time with my family after work.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: Second, I live a normal life. I do not like drinking alcohol. I can keep up my schedule. That means I spend time with my family after work.

Third, I have tried to follow the rule. So, I have open heard from my colleagues that I am the person who can rely on.

>>> Third, I have tried to follow the rule. So, I have openly heard from my colleagues that I am the person they can rely on.

>>> OR: Third, I always try to obey the rule. So I've been told frankly by my coworkers that I'm the person they can rely on.