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권경희/2025-06-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I believe that we can overcome this persistent inflation thanks to Lee administration's leadership. In fact, the reason is incompetence of last administration. Of course the worst person is Yoon president. Whenever I go to market I can feel the soaring food price more and more seriously.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good day, Ms. Lily!
Of course, People should anticipate positively with the new administration. It will also show your support so all of you will overcome the current status of your country. See you
Aki~


I believe that we can overcome this persistent inflation thanks to Lee administration's leadership.
>>> I believe that we can overcome this persistent inflation thanks to the Lee administration's leadership.

In fact, the reason is incompetence of last administration.
>>> In fact, the reason is the incompetence of the last administration.

Of course the worst person is Yoon president.
>>> Of course, the worst person is the Yoon president.

Whenever I go to market I can feel the soaring food price more and more seriously.
>>>Whenever I go to the market, I can feel the soaring food prices more and more seriously.
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