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The economy is always a significant concern. How is the Korean economy doing at the moment? Do you t

이진태/2025-06-18

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Recent economy of Korea is getting worse. because incresing of China economy and low birth rate. It looks like stop of economy. I can't expect any improve future right now. Korea should increase new technology.
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Hi! I’m so happy you put in the effort to complete the homework. You did a brilliant job sharing your experiences—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Recent economy of Korea is getting worse. because incresing of China economy and low birth rate.
>> The recent economy of Korea is getting worse due to the rise of China’s economy and the low birth rate.

It looks like stop of economy.
>> It feels like the economy has come to a halt.

I can't expect any improve future right now.
>> Right now, I can't expect any improvement in the near future.

Korea should increase new technology.
>> Korea should focus on developing new technology.
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