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What can younger people learn from spending more time with older people?

이진태/2025-06-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Young generation can learn many things from elder generation. Youngers know many things than elders, especially new tech. However, elder people have many experiences about life.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

Young generation can learn many things from elder generation.
>> The younger generation can learn many things from the older generation.

Youngers know many things than elders, especially new tech.
>> Young people know more about modern technology than older people.

However, elder people have many experiences about life.
>> However, older people have a lot of life experience.
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