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Do you think visiting new places is more enjoyable alone or with others? or

김영순/2025-06-18

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When I have been to visit a new place alone,I was so careful and felt unfamiliar with there. If I visit there with others, I will be curious about there. And it will be more enjoyable.
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Hi Young Soon!
It's the middle of the week.
Push yourself to keep working hard.
Consistency is the key.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I have been to visit, a new place alone,I was so careful and felt unfamiliar with there.
>> When I visit a new place alone, I try to be careful because it is unfamiliar to me.
If I visit there with others, I will be curious about there.
>> If I visit any new place with others, I would be curious about that place.
And it will be more enjoyable.
>> It would be more enjoyable. 
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