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In what ways do your interests influence your goals?

이진태/2025-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Someone's interests and hobbies influence thier goal. Because, when we are thinking about something, we tends to relate other categories. it's interaction. If a rich is my final goal, I should study about economy.

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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^

~~Teacher Ryka^^

Someone's interests and hobbies influence thier goal.

>> Someone's interests and hobbies influence their goals.

OR >> A person’s interests and hobbies can shape their goals.

Because, when we are thinking about something, we tends to relate other categories. it's interaction.

>> When we think about something, we tend to relate it to other areas—it's all connected.

If a rich is my final goal, I should study about economy.

>> For example, if becoming rich is my ultimate goal, I should study economics.