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What is the importance of taking care of nature? What can we do to take care of it?

이진태/2025-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
We already face global warming. Because we have destroyed nature for a long time. If we wouldn't take care of nature, it would cause many sideeffect more than now.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello! I'm so glad you made the effort to finish the homework. You did an outstanding job expressing your thoughts—keep up the excellent work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


We already face global warming. Because we have destroyed nature for a long time.
>> We are already facing global warming because we’ve been destroying nature for a long time.

If we wouldn't take care of nature, it would cause many sideeffect more than now.
>> If we don’t take care of nature, it will cause even more side effects than we’re seeing now.
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