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What stories about your best friend would you like to share?

차진혁/2025-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My best friends meat is elementary school 2th grade. he is very fun. But in elementary school 5th grade my best friend is very man.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good night's sleep! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                              What stories about your best friend would you like to share? 


My best friends meat is elementary school 2th grade. he is very fun. But in elementary school 5th grade my best friend is very man. 
>>> My best friend from second grade in elementary school was really fun. But by fifth grade, my best friend had changed; he was more mature and manly.

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