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Why is your arm in a cast? Write about it.

차유진/2025-06-19

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My arm in a cast because I broke my hand while I was beating Taekwondo so I take off cast in three weeks.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your third corrected composition, Yale. Please go over the revisions given below. Have a good rest and see you next class!  


Cheers,
Jean~~


                                  

                                         Why is your arm in a cast? Write about it.



My arm in a cast because I broke my hand while I was beating Taekwondo so I take off cast in three weeks.
>>> My arm is in a cast because I broke my hand during Taekwondo practice. The cast will be removed in three weeks.
>>> OR: I broke my hand while doing Taekwondo, so my arm’s in a cast. I’ll get it taken off in three weeks.

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