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I smile a lot a day.

유수빈/2025-06-20

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I smile a lot a day. Because there are many good people behind me. Whenever I go to university, I meet my friends I love. When I talk to them, I always smile at the slightest thing. So, I think I'm happy, and lucky person.
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Hi Kara!^^ 

Did someone tell you that you have a sweet smile? 
You look so sweet when you smile.
 
Andrea 

I smile a lot a day. Because there are many good people behind me.
>> I smile a lot in a day because there are many good people behind me. 

Whenever I go to university, I meet my friends I love.
>> Whenever I go to the university, I meet my friend whom I love. 

When I talk to them, I always smile at the slightest thing.
>> When I talk to them, I always smile at the smallest thing. 

So, I think I'm happy, and lucky person.
>> So, I think I'm a happy and lucky person. 
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