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What do you think makes a visitor feel welcome? Explain.

김영순/2025-06-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
A host should be kind and smile .A visitor can feel comfortable and positive impression. A
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
This is a good example.
Let's give more next time.
Thank you for your effort today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
A host should be kind and smile .
>> A host should be kind and should always smile. 
A visitor can feel comfortable and positive impression.
>> A visitor can feel comfortable and have a positive impression. 
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