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이유민/2025-06-21

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I have different interests with each friends in common. Because we became close in different reasons. One group of my friends and I have a similar YouTube algorithm, so we can share funny things while we talk. Another group can share our high-school life or middle school life. It's a past memories but it's always funny whenever we talk about that.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Oh, yes! That's true. 
It's good that you share something in common in every circle of friends you have.
_T. SHAY^^
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I have different interests with each friends in common. Because we became close in different reasons. 
>>I have different common interest with each friend because we became close for different reasons.
One group of my friends and I have a similar YouTube algorithm, so we can share funny things while we talk. 
>>Correct
OR: One group of friends and I share similar YouTube algorithm, so we can talk about those things.
Another group can share our high-school life or middle school life. 
>>With my other circle of friends, we can share about our high school life and middle school life. 
It's a past memories but it's always funny whenever we talk about that.
>>Those are past memories, but it's always fun whenever we talk about those.
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