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What countries are you afraid of and why?

차진혁/2025-06-22

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I think countries are afraid of is China because China is kitchen is China talk and my country history is China talk. So I hate china

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. See you later!

Cheers,

Jean~~

What countries are you afraid of and why?

I think countries are afraid of is China because China is kitchen is China talk and my country history is China talk.

So I hate china

>>> I think what countries are afraid of is China because China is the kitchen, China is the talk, and in my country’s history, China is also the talk. That’s why I hate China. [I HONESTLY CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO SAY HERE THAT'S WHY I SIMPLY EDITED THE GRAMMAR BUT THE SENTENCE DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE. CHECK THE SENTENCE BELOW FOR A VARIATION OF THIS SENTENCE.]

>>> OR: I believe many countries are cautious of China due to its growing global influence. In my country, China plays a prominent role in both current affairs and historical narratives. These associations have led me to feel negatively toward China.