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Which word would best define you as a friend?

김일환/2025-06-22

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If I define myself with a word, the word will be "unusual". I have a different idea from my friends. When I went on a trip to Vietnam, my friends found the cheapest restaurant. They wanted to save money to spend money at night. I didn't agree with them. I am the only one who enjoys coffee, so I love visiting romantic cafes. But, my friends only drink canned coffee. I prioritize quality over quantity.

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Good evening, Hwanny!

Although it will require effort, making friends with your opposite personality type will broaden your horizons and enable you to connect with a greater number of individuals in the future.

Strong, varied connections also enhance your ability to communicate with a variety of people outside of your partnerships.

Thank you for answering you homework.

See you later in class!^^

__T. Mayleen :)

If I define myself with a word, the word will be "unusual".

>>> If I were to define myself as a friend, it'd be "unusual."

I have a different idea from my friends.

>>> CORRECT

When I went on a trip to Vietnam, my friends found the cheapest restaurant.

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: When I visited Vietnam, my friends chose the cheapest restaurant.

They wanted to save money to spend money at night. I didn't agree with them.

>>> They wanted to save money to have more to spend at night, but I didn't agree with them.

I am the only one who enjoys coffee, so I love visiting romantic cafes. But, my friends only drink canned coffee. I prioritize quality over quantity.

>>> I am the only one who enjoys coffee, so I love visiting romantic cafes. My friends only drank canned coffee. I prioritize quality over quantity.