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Is being flexible an important skill in life? Why?

이진태/2025-06-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In Korean idiom, the strong tree could be broken by wind, however the reed couldn't be broken by wind. Being flexible in life is important. We can't know everything. and sometimes we face hardtime.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^



In Korean idiom, the strong tree could be broken by wind, however the reed couldn't be broken by wind.
>> In a Korean idiom, a strong tree can be broken by the wind, but a reed bends and does not break.

Being flexible in life is important.
>> This teaches us that being flexible in life is important.

We can't know everything. and sometimes we face hardtime.
>> We can’t know everything, and sometimes we go through difficult times.
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