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Should we preserve the traditions and practices during big holidays? Why or why not? If one ethnic

이진태/2025-06-23

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If one ethnic group would lose all traditions, it is same as lose identity of ethnic group. Korean's life have been becoming more western. In terms of culture, it is a cultural absorption.
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Hi! I'm so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


If one ethnic group would lose all traditions, it is same as lose identity of ethnic group.
>> If an ethnic group were to lose all of its traditions, it would be the same as losing its identity.

Korean's life have been becoming more western.
>> Korean life has been becoming more Westernized. 

In terms of culture, it is a cultural absorption.
>> In terms of culture, this is a form of cultural absorption.
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