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Kindly talk about your most recent fascination. Fascination is being greatly interested in or deligh
최정희/2025-06-23
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I'm interesting in home training.
After covide 19, I have been exercising at home with the yutube.
There are a lot of useful exercise programs in the OTT and it is free.
I bought some equipment for exercise.
I feel a sense of accomplishment after exercising I am proud of myself when I see my abs.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening, Lydia! (^_^)
The term "the sooner you start investing, the better" refers to compound interest, whereby the money you make on your investments is reinvested to create a fresh foundation upon which future profits can rise. The potential for expansion rises as that base gets bigger.
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
I'm interesting in home training.
>>> I'm interested in home training.
After covide 19, I have been exercising at home with the yutube.
After covide 19, I have been exercising at home with the yutube.
>>> After COVID19, I have been exercising at home following YouTube videos.
There are a lot of useful exercise programs in the OTT and it is free.
There are a lot of useful exercise programs in the OTT and it is free.
>>> There are a lot of useful exercise programs on OTT and they're for free.
I bought some equipment for exercise.
I bought some equipment for exercise.
>>> CORRECT
I feel a sense of accomplishment after exercising I am proud of myself when I see my abs.
I feel a sense of accomplishment after exercising I am proud of myself when I see my abs.
>>> CORRECT
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