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What’s the most recent thing you did that improved your mood?

이진태/2025-06-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I took a trip in Vietnam lastweek. I was suffered many stressful issues. However, I forgot at the resort and beach.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I took a trip in Vietnam lastweek.
>> I took a trip to Vietnam last week.

I was suffered many stressful issues.
>> I went through many stressful issues.

However, I forgot at the resort and beach.
>> However, I was able to forget them at the resort and beach.
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