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Who do you resemble in your family?

김일환/2025-06-24

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I resemble my father, but we have totally different personalities. My younger brother also resembles my father, and takes after him. They love drinking alcohol, and only drink soju. I don't like drinking alcohol as much as they do. I take after my mom. My mother and I understand each other, so we talk a lot. Ps. Hi, Mayleen, I am going to postpone tomorrow's class because it's my grandfather's memorial day. I am going to my parents' house to help them and take part in the ceremony. See you on Friday!.

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Good evening, Hwanny!

Due to the genetic features that they acquire from their parents, people typically look like them. Physical attributes, including height, eye and hair color, and face structure, as well as personality qualities and other attributes, can show this. Some people may also share genetic material with other relatives, such as siblings or grandparents. People may also start to look alike because they have similar experiences, lifestyles, or even because they deliberately choose to imitate the looks or behaviors of someone they look up to.

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__T. Mayleen :)

I resemble my father, but we have totally different personalities.

>>> I resemble my father, yet our personalities are very different.

My younger brother also resembles my father, and takes after him.

>>> My younger brother also resembles my father and takes after him.

>>> OR: My younger brother looks like and follows in the footsteps of my father.

They love drinking alcohol, and only drink soju. I don't like drinking alcohol as much as they do.

>>> They love drinking alcohol and only drink soju. I don't like drinking alcohol as much as they do.

>>> OR: They enjoy drinking and solely consume soju. I do not enjoy consuming alcohol as much as they do.

I take after my mom. My mother and I understand each other, so we talk a lot.
>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: I resemble my mother. My mother and I understand each other well, therefore we chat frequently.

Ps. Hi, Mayleen, I am going to postpone tomorrow's class because it's my grandfather's memorial day.

>>> P.S. Hi, Mayleen! My grandfather's memorial day is tomorrow, so I'm going to postpone class.

I am going to my parents' house to help them and take part in the ceremony. See you on Friday!

>>> CORRECT

>>> OR: I'm heading to my parents' place to aid them and participate in the ceremony. See you on Friday!