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이유민/2025-06-25

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Each of people does very different action when they are nervous. I often see nervous people when they need to do presentation. Their voices vibrate and they are stiff. And I usually read the script very fast when I'm nervous. Shifty eyes is another action when I'm nervous. I look the floor and can't see others' eyes. And I make a fake smile.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You're right we all act differently.
In my case, my knees usually get wobbly, and I blush.
_T. SHAY^^
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Each of people does very different action when they are nervous.

>>Each person does a different action when they are nervous.

OR: Each person reacts differently when they are nervous.
I often see nervous people when they need to do presentation.
>>I often see people get nervous when they need to give a presentation.

Their voices vibrate and they are stiff.
>>Their voices shake and they appear stiff.
And I usually read the script very fast when I'm nervous.
>>Correct
OR: I tend to speak fast when I'm nervous.
Shifty eyes is another action when I'm nervous.
>>I tend to have shifty eyes when I'm nervous.
I look the floor and can't see others' eyes.

>>I look at the floor and I can't look at other people in the eye.
And I make a fake smile.
>> And I wear a fake smile.