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I have a brother.

유수빈/2025-06-25

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I have a brother. He is a high school student, 19 years old. His favorite food is ramyeon. Actually, he loves spicy foods. But, I don't enjoy spicy foods, this is different from him.
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Hi Kara! 

Having two older brothers is the best. 
My brothers were supportive, loving, and overly protective. 
They always treated me with so much love. 

Andrea 

I have a brother.
>> Correct 

He is a high school student, 19 years old.
>> He is 19 years old, a high school student. 

His favorite food is ramyeon. Actually, he loves spicy foods.
>> Correct 

But, I don't enjoy spicy foods, this is different from him.
>> We are totally opposite since I do not like spicy food. 

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