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Why is it important for children to spend time with adults? Explain.

김영순/2025-06-25

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Children should be care for and protected by adults. That's why they can grow up emotionally stable and learn socially relationships.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
Good job today.
Please be careful of your sentence patterns.
Refer to the correction below.
See you later!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Children should be care for and protected by adults.
>> Children should be cared for and protected by adults.
That's why they can grow up emotionally stable and learn socially relationships.
>> This is so that they can grow up emotionally stable and learn how to handle social relationships.

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