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이유민/2025-06-25

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Are there any special ways that you like to pose for photographs? Answer: Before answering the question, I want to congratulate your graduation, Shay! Actually, I can't pose well when I take a photo. So I always follow suggestions of my photographers. They often show a lot of pose and catch my best shot for a short time. I usually hide my hand because it's really awkward and I don't know what gesture I should do. And we often pretend to be laughing when I take a photo with my friends. We can show our natural smile in the photo.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you so much Megan. ^^
Thank you for your answer too.
_T. SHAY^^
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Are there any special ways that you like to pose for photographs?
Answer:
Actually, I can't pose well when I take a photo.
>>Correct

OR: Actually, I'm not good at posing for photos.

OR: I struggle with posing when someone takes my picture.
So I always follow suggestions of my photographers.
>>Correct

OR: Because of that I always follow my photographer's instructions/suggestions.
They often show a lot of pose and catch my best shot for a short time.
>>They often show a lot of poses and quickly catch/capture my best shot.
I usually hide my hand because it's really awkward and I don't know what gesture I should do.
>>Correct
OR: I never know what to do with my hands, so I tend to keep them out of sight.
And we often pretend to be laughing when I take a photo with my friends.

>>And we often pretend to laugh when I take a photo with my friends.

We can show our natural smile in the photo.
>>Correct
OR: Our natural smiles really come through in the photo.