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What is the implication of having an aging population?
이진태/2025-06-26
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Becoming aging popluation means a decrease productivity and energy of country.
European countries has already experienced this situation.
So, someone say that Europe is an old countrie
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Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
| Becoming aging popluation means a decrease productivity and energy of country. An aging population means decreased productivity and energy for a country. European countries has already experienced this situation. So, someone say that Europe is an old countrie European countries have already experienced this situation, so some people say that Europe is an old continent. |
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