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What is your most unforgettable autumn memory in Korea?

이승훈/2025-06-26

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

actually, i don't have special memory in autumn, but i was fun last year in autumn. i went to taejeongdae with girlfriend in busan. taejeongdae is busan's famous sights. taejeongdae is sea nearby. sea sight was very beautiful. and i ate fall spotted sardine. fall spotted sardine taste good during in fall and weather was very good. so i ate delicious fall spotted sardin at good view.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

I tried to search for Taejeongdae because it was my first time hearing about this place, and it was indeed a very beautiful place. I saw that you can view the ocean from there. It's also nice that aside from the view, you were able to enjoy the food during the fall season.

- T. Caitlyn

actually, i don't have special memory in autumn, but i was fun last year in autumn.

>> Actually, I don't have any special memories in autumn, but I had fun last year during autumn.
i went to taejeongdae with girlfriend in busan.

>> I went to Taejeongdae with my girlfriend in Busan.
taejeongdae is busan's famous sights.

>> Taejeongdae is one of Busan's famous sights.
taejeongdae is sea nearby.

>> Taejeongdae is located near the sea.

sea sight was very beautiful.

>> The sea view was very beautiful.

And I ate fall spotted sardine.

>> CORRECT
fall spotted sardine taste good during in fall and weather was very good.

>> Fall spotted sardines taste good in the fall, and the weather was very nice.
so i ate delicious fall spotted sardin at good view.

>> So I ate delicious fall spotted sardines with a good view.