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What is the implication of having an aging population?

신봉규/2025-06-30

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aging population means a shrinking working population. The country will have to accept immigrants, and society will become a little more chaotic.
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aging population means a shrinking working population. The country will have to accept immigrants, and society will become a little more chaotic.
>> As the population ages, the working population decreases. The country will likely need to accept immigrants to fill labor gaps, which may make society a bit more dynamic and possibly less orderly.
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