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Are you open to learning more about other countries' cultures? Why is it necessary to know or be fa

김유진/2025-07-01

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I think being familiar with another country's culture is good because it can help building positive relationships with other countries and understand each other better.When we try to be open minded and understand why that culture was made and the form of it and it will be much easier to empathize foreigners. Also showing that you enjoy and respect the culture, foreigners will feel much more comfortable with you. So being familiar with othe’s culture is important.

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Thank you for this Eugene! Keep them coming. Have a good day!

I think being familiar with another country's culture is good because it can help building positive relationships with other countries and understand each other better.

>>> I think being familiar with another country's culture is good because it can help in building positive relationships with other countries and understanding each other better.

>>> OR: I think being familiar with another country's culture is good because it can help build positive relationships with other countries and understand each other better.

When we try to be open minded and understand why that culture was made and the form of it and it will be much easier to empathize foreigners.

>>> When we try to be open minded and understand why that culture was made and how it was formed, it will be much easier to empathize with foreigners.

Also showing that you enjoy and respect the culture, foreigners will feel much more comfortable with you.

>>> Also, showing that you enjoy and respect the culture will make foreigners feel much more comfortable with you.

So being familiar with others culture is important.

>>> correct