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I like meeting new people

손주아/2025-07-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I really like meeting new people. I am very outgoing, so some introvert peolpe feel tired when they meet me. But I also like meeting them, too. I talk a lot, and I like talking. So I like talking with many people. They all have different thinking, and talking with all of them is too fun. And I have tips for being friends with new people, too. I need to address words first. And if I think they want to talk with me, I ask them many things. I like meeting and being friends with new people!
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Here's your corrected homework, Jun A. Please go over the revisions given below. See you next class!  


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                                     Do you like meeting new people?



I really like meeting new people. 
>>> I love meeting new people. 

I am very outgoing, so some introvert peolpe feel tired when they meet me. But I also like meeting them, too.
>>> I’m naturally very outgoing, so sometimes more introverted folks find me a bit overwhelming at first, but I enjoy connecting with them just as much. 

 I talk a lot, and I like talking. So I like talking with many people. 
>>> I enjoy talking, and I tend to talk a lot, so I love chatting with all kinds of people.

They all have different thinking, and talking with all of them is too fun. And I have tips for being friends with new people, too.
>>> Each person brings a unique perspective, and I genuinely enjoy those conversations. I’ve also got some helpful tips for making friends with new people.

 I need to address words first. And if I think they want to talk with me, I ask them many things. I like meeting and being friends with new people!
>>> I usually start by choosing my words carefully. If I sense someone’s open to talking, I ask them lots of questions. I really enjoy meeting new people and making friends!

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