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Do you prefer the sunset or the sunrise, and why?

이승훈/2025-07-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

i prefer sunset than sunrise. there are two reason. the first, in order to looking sunset, i should early wake up. and i can feel early start today than someone. so i can feel "today is long." the second, i don't like dark. when i meet darkness, i feel depressed. after sunrise, will became darkness and night. specially i hate sunrise in sunday. because i shoiuld go work next day.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

I totally understand your point. Sunrises are symbols of a new day, so seeing the sunrise makes you feel that another day has already begun and that you have a lot of things to do. I actually feel the same way, but because of my job, I have no choice but to wake up really early.

- T. Caitlyn

i prefer sunset than sunrise.

>> I prefer sunsets to sunrises.

there are two reason.

>> There are two reasons.
the first, in order to looking sunset, i should early wake up.

>> First, in order to see the sunset, I have to wake up early.
and i can feel early start today than someone. so i can feel "today is long."

>> And I feel like I start the day earlier than others.

the second, i don't like dark.

>> Second, I don’t like the dark.

when i meet darkness, i feel depressed.

>> When it gets dark, I feel depressed.
after sunrise, will became darkness and night.

>> After sunset, it becomes dark and night follows.
specially i hate sunrise in sunday.

>> Especially, I hate sunrises on Sundays.
because i shoiuld go work next day.

>> Because I have to go to work the next day.