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The homework for 2nd July.

조윤호/2025-07-02

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Q : Do you always bring your wallet or purse with you when you go out? Why? A : Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out except for short outing.  When I am going out shortly, I just bring my mobile phone because I can pay with Samsung pay.       But as I cannot pay transportation fee with my phone, I always bring my wallet.
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Good evening, Eddy! ^^,)

Having enough cash on hand is often a good idea in case of emergencies, power outages, or unforeseen circumstances when cards might not work.

Thank you for answering your homework. I have made some modifications.
Practice English whenever you can. Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out except for short outing.
>>> Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out except for short outings.
>>> OR: Yes, I always bring my wallet when I go out, save for short trips.

When I am going out shortly, I just bring my mobile phone because I can pay with Samsung pay.
>>> When I am going out shortly, I just bring my mobile phone because I can pay with Samsung Pay.
>>> OR: When I go out soon, I merely bring my phone because I can pay using Samsung Pay.

But as I cannot pay transportation fee with my phone, I always bring my wallet.
>>> But as I cannot pay the transportation fee with my phone, I always bring my wallet.
>>> OR: But I usually bring my wallet because I can't use my phone to pay the transportation fee.
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