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Who's the healthiest person you know? How do they maintain their health?

차유진/2025-07-03

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I think the healthiest person is eat a salad and running every morning and they are to exercise hard. And the healthiest person is don't eat very sweet and salty.

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Who's the healthiest person you know? How do they maintain their health?

I think the healthiest person is eat a salad and running every morning and they are to exercise hard. And the healthiest person is don't eat very sweet and salty.

>>> The healthiest people exercise regularly, eat salads, and avoid overly sweet or salty foods.