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No, not all parents who feed their children junk food are irresponsible.

손주아/2025-07-03

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I don't think it's bad to feed their children junk food. Because junk food is not good for you, but we don't die just by eating it a few times. And because it is so delicious, eating junk food from can help relieve stress. And I don't think every parent who feeds their children junk food is irresponsible because their children may begging them that they want to eat junk food.

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Are parents who feed junk food to their children irresponsible?

No, not all parents who feed their children junk food are irresponsible.

>>> No, I don’t think all parents who let their children eat junk food are irresponsible.

I don't think it's bad to feed their children junk food.

>>> I don’t believe feeding kids junk food is necessarily a bad thing.

Because junk food is not good for you, but we don't die just by eating it a few times.

>>> While junk food isn’t healthy, eating it occasionally won’t do serious harm.

And because it is so delicious, eating junk food from can help relieve stress.

>>> Since it tastes good and can boost your mood, a little indulgence might even help reduce stress.

And I don't think every parent who feeds their children junk food is irresponsible because their children may begging them that they want to eat junk food.

>>> And let’s be honest, sometimes kids really beg for it, and saying “yes” now and then doesn’t make someone a bad parent.

>>> OR: Moreover, many parents may simply be responding to persistent requests from their children, which is a common part of parenting.