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I think good life habits make a person beautiful. If they sit straight not crossing their legs, their body figures look better. And if they always smile, it affects to their good face.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I agree with everything that you mentioned especially the last one.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think good life habits make a person beautiful.
Thank you for sharing.
I agree with everything that you mentioned especially the last one.
_T. SHAY^^
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I think good life habits make a person beautiful.
>>Correct
OR: I think good lifestyle makes a person beautiful.
If they sit straight not crossing their legs, their body figures look better.
OR: I think good lifestyle makes a person beautiful.
If they sit straight not crossing their legs, their body figures look better.
>>If they sit up straight without crossing their legs, their posture looks better.
And if they always smile, it affects to their good face.
>>And if they always smile, it adds to their good looks.
And if they always smile, it affects to their good face.
>>And if they always smile, it adds to their good looks.
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