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I don't like horror movie.

유수빈/2025-07-04

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I don't like horror movie. But, I saw 'Annabelle' with my middle school friends. Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like ghost. I was so scared, especially it moves at the night. So, after watching this movie, I don't put the doll looks like human in my room.
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Hi Kara! 

I also do not watch horror movies, especially when I am alone. 
They give me nightmares.

Andrea 

I don't like horror movie. But, I saw 'Annabelle' with my middle school friends.
>> I don't like horror movies. But I saw 'Annabelle' with my middle school friends.

Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like ghosts.
>> Annabelle is a doll, but it moves like a ghost.

I was so scared, especially it moves at the night.
>> I was so scared, especially when it moved at night.

So, after watching this movie, I don't put the doll looks like human in my room.
>> So, after watching this movie, I don't put the doll that looks like a human in my room.
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