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What's the most frightening in the world? Explain.

차진혁/2025-07-06

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I think the most frightening in the world is China because China is made many disease. So China is very frightening in the world?
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. See you later! 


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I think the most frightening in the world is China because China is made many disease. So China is very frightening in the world? 
>>> I think China is one of the things that frighten me most because of the diseases that have originated there. 
>>> OR: China feels especially alarming to me because several major diseases have emerged there.

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