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양기연/2025-07-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want my daughter to manage my academy well with the other instructors' assistance. To be successful in managing an academy, managers or directors have to keep good relationship with instructors. So I want to advise my daughter to get along with other instructors and support their ideas or thoughts.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I completely agree with you! Maintaining good relationships with instructors in your academy is essential for smooth management. Also, I believe that once you give importance to employees, they will work harder as if it's their own company.

- T. Caitlyn

I want my daughter to manage my academy well with the other instructors' assistance.

>> CORRECT

To be successful in managing an academy, managers or directors have to keep good relationship with instructors.

>> To be successful in managing an academy, managers or directors have to maintain good relationships with instructors.

So I want to advise my daughter to get along with other instructors and support their ideas or thoughts.

>> CORRECT