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최수철/2025-07-08

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I would lean to going on vacation side. The reason is that staycation is the things that I can do on my regular days and on a national holiday, such as Buddist day, Children's day and national liberation day. On the other hand, Going on vacation is the thing that I can get away from my boring routines and stuffy office. I don't want to be stuck in the usual day of my life in which every extrovert love to spend their time doing active and interesting activities outside of thier comfort zone.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Charlie^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, indeed, it's good to experience new things and break the usual.
_T. SHAY^^
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I would lean to going on vacation side.

>>I would lean toward going away on vacation.
The reason is that staycation is the things that I can do on my regular days and on a national holiday, such as Buddist day, Children's day and national liberation day.

>>The reason is that staycation includes things I can do on regular days or national holidays, such as Buddhist Day, Children's Day, and National Liberation Day.
On the other hand, Going on vacation is the thing that I can get away from my boring routines and stuffy office.

>>On the other hand, going on vacation lets me away from my boring routines and stuffy office.

OR: On the other hand, going on vacation helps me escape usual routine.

I don't want to be stuck in the usual day of my life in which every extrovert love to spend their time doing active and interesting activities outside of thier comfort zone.

>>I don't want to be stuck in the usual day of my life in while every extrovert spends their time doing active and interesting activities outside of their comfort zone.

OR: I don't want to be stuck in the same kind of day-to-day life while extroverts are out doing exciting things outside their comfort zones.