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corporal punishment

양기연/2025-07-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I don't think corporal punishment should be allowed in schools or academies. Any corporal punishments are against the human dignity right. And it is effective temporally in disciplining students, but the effect doesn't last long run. In many cases, it causes backfire.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I totally agree with this. Yes, teachers do have a hard time disciplining students. However, corporal punishment is only a short-term solution and might cause trauma to students in the long run. It’s better to consider other ways to discipline misbehaving students in a way that helps them learn from their actions, like what you mentioned in class.

- T. Caitlyn

I don't think corporal punishment should be allowed in schools or academies.

>> CORRECT

Any corporal punishments are against the human dignity right.

>> Any form of corporal punishment goes against human dignity and rights.

And it is effective temporally in disciplining students, but the effect doesn't last long run.

>> It may be temporarily effective in disciplining students, but the effect doesn’t last in the long run.

In many cases, it causes backfire.

>> In many cases, it backfires.