If I can drive for a Iong time, I want to go to the coastaI road with the sea. Because the scenery with sea would be so pretty. Also, I like the sea and water, so I think I can satisfy my taste. There are a few citys I'd Iike to visit, but I'd Iike to go to Jeju first. Jeju is famous for its coastaI roads and good pIaces to go for a drive. I want to go there as much as I'm Iooking forward to how beautiful the scenery it has. Second, I want to visit Gangneung, Sokcho, and Jumunjin. There are aIso famous for seafood. Among seafood, I especiaIIy Iove crabs and shrimp, so there's no reason not to visit three places where I can taste fresh seafood and enjoy a nice coastaI drive. Last, I'd Iike to go to Yangyang. It is a city close to Gangneung, Sokcho, and Jumunjin. This city is known as a good place to surfing. I want to enjoy a coastal road drive and surfing, which is a water activity.

Hi! 

Thank you for your essay! You did a great job expressing your ideas clearly, and I can see that you’re putting real effort into organizing your thoughts in English. 

I’ve corrected some sentences to make them more natural and fluent. 
But also, I like the itinerary you mentioned. I was imagining it. 

I hope that you could do it soon. ^^

~ Teacher Gina