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Write about a teacher who had a strong influence on you. What did you learn form him or her?

김영순/2025-07-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
He was a teacher who taught me English course in my high school. He majored in philosophy. He emphasized the important of the humanities, anthropology, archaeology, aesthetics I learn what humanities are.He made me think of the value of the life,happiness.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
Take note of the use of articles in your sentences.
You have to differentiate general and specific ideas.
Good work!
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
He was a teacher who taught me English course in my high school.
>> He was a teacher who taught me an English course in my high school.
He majored in philosophy.
>> Correct
He emphasized the important of the humanities, anthropology, archaeology, aesthetics
>> He emphasized the importance of humanities, anthropology, archaeology and aesthetics.
I learn what humanities are.
>> I learned what humanities was.
He made me think of the value of the life,happiness.
>> He made me think of the value of life and happiness.
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