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The homework for 9th July

조윤호/2025-07-10

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Q : In 3-5 sentences, talk about your most unforgettable summer experience. A : My most unforgettable summer experience was a 3 years ago. As me & my friends getting older and working at the company, we do not have a time to meet all together. But, 3 years ago, we goes a trip to pension near valley. We did a water playing, ball game and drank an alcohol. It was very funny and my most unforgettable summer experience ever.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good afternoon, Eddy! ^-^

Have a great summer! Spend time with loved ones, try new things, and explore the outdoors to make the most of the lovely weather and breathtaking landscape.
Remember to enjoy every minute, whether you're climbing through the mountains, going to the local markets, or just lounging in the refreshing mountain air.

I will see you later in class!

__T. Mayleen :)


My most unforgettable summer experience was a 3 years ago.
>>> My most unforgettable summer experience was 3 years ago.
As me & my friends getting older and working at the company, we do not have a time to meet all together.
>>> As I & my friends get older and work at the company, we do not have time to meet all together.
>>> OR: As my friends and I get older and work at the company, we don't have time to get together.
But, 3 years ago, we goes a trip to pension near valley.
>>> But, 3 years ago, we went on a trip to a pension near the valley.
We did a water playing, ball game and drank an alcohol.
>>> We played a water game, played a ball game, and drank alcohol.
It was very funny and my most unforgettable summer experience ever.
>>> It was very fun and my most unforgettable summer experience ever.
>>> OR: It was the most enjoyable and memorable summer experience I have ever had.
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