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What adjectives, in your opinion, best describe your dream job? (Homework)

손승아/2025-07-10

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I think reading books describe my dream job well. My dream job is Forensic Pathologist, so I have to study hard.
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Good afternoon, Anna! ^-^

Having a dream job is often seen as advantageous. Having a dream job can make work feel more like a passion and less like a duty by giving one a sense of fulfillment, happiness, and purpose. Additionally, it can be in line with your ideals, utilize your special talents, and have a constructive effect. But it's also critical to keep a balanced viewpoint and avoid letting the quest for your ideal career take precedence over other crucial facets of life, like work-life balance and personal well-being. 

Practice English whenever you can!

__T. Mayleen :)

I think reading books describe my dream job well.
>>> I think reading books describes my dream job well.

My dream job is Forensic Pathologist, so I have to study hard.
>>> My dream job is forensic pathologist, so I have to study hard.
>>> OR: I have to work hard in my studies since I want to be a forensic pathologist.
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