영작교정 첨삭 서비스

현재위치

Home > 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

What are your social fears and why?

차진혁/2025-07-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't have a social fears because I'm have a many friend like a talk. So I'm not have a social fears.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your first corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below.  


Cheers,
Jean~~




                              


                                  What are your social fears and why?

 
I don't have a social fears because I'm have a many friend like a talk. So I'm not have a social fears.
>>> I don’t have any social fears because I have lots of friends who enjoy talking with me.
>>> OR With friends who love to talk, I never feel shy or uneasy.
이전글 목록 다음글