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Gap investment

양기연/2025-07-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I haven't thought of the effect of gap investment on markets. I am just concerned about the regional disparity because many people want to purchase apartments in specific regions such as Gangnam, suburban areas, or new towns. And some wealthy foreigners do gap investment to earn profits, which can cause housing market unstable. I think the housing market should not be an area of short-term investment or gambling.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I totally agree with you! Gap investment indeed has a big effect on the stability of the market. It can cause property prices to skyrocket due to high demand or drop because of a slow economy. It can also widen the gap in prices between in-demand areas and those that are less popular.

- T. Caitlyn

I haven't thought of the effect of gap investment on markets.

>> I haven't thought about the effect of gap investment on the markets.

I am just concerned about the regional disparity because many people want to purchase apartments in specific regions such as Gangnam, suburban areas, or new towns.

>> CORRECT

And some wealthy foreigners do gap investment to earn profits, which can cause housing market unstable.

>> Some wealthy foreigners engage in gap investment to earn profits, which can cause the housing market to become unstable.

I think the housing market should not be an area of short-term investment or gambling.

>> CORRECT