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What economic and political factors should be considered when planning a second distribution of paym

김영경/2025-07-11

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The government should consider the financial situation of recipients when deciding who will receive the support. This is because the purpose of the cash handout is to encourage more people to spend and boost the economy. The more urgently people need money for their livelihood, the more likely they are to spend it. On the other hand, for the wealthy, a small amount of government money is unlikely to influence their spending habits, as they typically decide when and how to use their money regardless of receiving extra funds. Overall, I believe this distribution of money can help stimulate the flow of money and contribute to revitalizing Korea’s stagnant economy.

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Steve,

These are great insights.

Thank you.

-Teacher Ash

The government should consider the financial situation of recipients when deciding who will receive the support.

>> CORRECT!

This is because the purpose of the cash handout is to encourage more people to spend and boost the economy.

>>CORRECT!

The more urgently people need money for their livelihood, the more likely they are to spend it.

>>CORRECT

OR >> The greater the necessity for individuals to secure their basic needs, the more inclined they are to spend their money.

On the other hand, for the wealthy, a small amount of government money is unlikely to influence their spending habits, as they typically decide when and how to use their money regardless of receiving extra funds.

>> CORRECT!

Overall, I believe this distribution of money can help stimulate the flow of money and contribute to revitalizing Korea’s stagnant economy.

>> CORRECT

OR >> In my opinion, this allocation of funds could stimulate economic activity and contribute to the recovery of Korea's faltering economy.