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Is volunteering worth the time it takes?

이지윤/2025-07-11

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Volunteering is important to people's thoughts and minds, and I think each person can think differently. This can be thought differently depending on one's thoughts and values. If you think it's one-time action and an event, it's not a waste of time, but I don't think it's worth it. Also, you can be adamant that you won't get anything. However, I think it's worth it even if it takes a lot of time or it's hard if you're a person who enjoys volunteering and likes it or truly volunteers. Contrary to the above case, there will be a lot of things you get.

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Hello, Yun!

I missed reading your insights! Hahaha thank you for making another one ~

Chammy

Volunteering is important to people's thoughts and minds, and I think each person can think differently.

>> Volunteering is important for people's thoughts and minds, and I think each person thinks differently.

This can be thought differently depending on one's thoughts and values.

>>This can be thought of differently depending on one's thoughts and values.

If you think it's one-time action and an event, it's not a waste of time, but I don't think it's worth it.

>> If you think it's a one-time action and an event, it's not a waste of time, but I don't think it's worth it.

Also, you can be adamant that you won't get anything.

>>CORRECT

However, I think it's worth it even if it takes a lot of time or it's hard if you're a person who enjoys volunteering and likes it, or truly volunteers. Contrary to the above case, there will be a lot of things you get.

>> Even though it can be difficult or time-consuming, if you're a person who genuinely volunteers or enjoys volunteering, I believe it's worth it. In contrast to the aforementioned scenario, you will receive a lot of stuff.