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How can schools create a more engaging learning experience for students?
김영순/2025-07-12
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
At first,students can enjoy learning at school.
In order to do that, schools have to create the individualized education program.
Students will participate spontaneously that program according to the level, speed,and
interest of the individual
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
Let's take the whole week as an opportunity to learn.
Combine everything that you have studied and apply them in future work.
I always believe in your potential.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
At first, students can enjoy learning at school.
>> First, students can enjoy learning at school.
In order to do that, schools have to create the individualized education program.
In order to do that, schools have to create the individualized education program.
>> In order for that to happen, schools have to create individualized education programs.
Students will participate spontaneously that program according to the level, speed, and interest of the individual
Students will participate spontaneously that program according to the level, speed, and interest of the individual
>> Students will participate in those programs according to the level, speed, and interest of the individual.
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